Thursday, August 11, 2016

a sneak peek of explosian of mars , I made this when I was 6 so its not as good as the newer stories I made._Thomas

Explosion to mars

Chapter 1

The two potions

Once there was a boy, I mean a man and his name was Carb.  Carb was 30 and still didn’t have a job.  Carb tried to be a cook, a construction worker, and an artist.  One day, Carb saw a building with a “s” on it that means Science.  He loved doing experiments, so he went in.  He was new to the building so he got to  do whatever he wanted for a week. 

On Friday, he was going to make a potion that would make him bounce a lot, 500 miles up.  But one potion had another potion in it.  When Carb drank it, it teleported him to Mars and that’s how our story begins.


Chapter 2

The Kliens.

When Carb was on Mars he saw a space suit.  He put it on.  He saw somrthing move.  “Who’s there?” said Carb.  But nothing happened except the thing.   After five hours, Carb was still there.  And up, up, up went the moving thing.  When it fell down, it was there. 

It had green eyes, five arms on the left and two on the right.  It had ten legs, five on the left and five on the right.  It was yellow.  Carb went back a little, a lot, five inches.  The alien said, “Help!!!!  62278 have escaped.  How is 62678?  The baddest alien in the galaxy!!!!  He destroyed 100 planets; I mean, galaxies!!!!  What did he escape from?  Jail!”

After Carb ran away then 10000 aliens the exact same.  They all said, “Help!!!!!”  Carb ran away but the aliens chasted him. 



After five hours, he noticed the aliens were nice.  So Carb said, “How do we get 62678?”
They answered, “First go to the rocky black hole.  Go in it and it will bring you to the galaxy of Dnom.   Then go in the Cabell then you’re there.  You’ll need a ship.”

“Bring out the ship,” said an alien and a huge ship came out.  It was a mile up.  Carb’s eyes thrend huge.  He went in and flew off.  Then he was at the black hole